Bring a clique into the 21st century – and make the newly edited sentence the first line or lead in a story. For example:
“My blood boiled and I saw red.”
“My insides were lava; my eyes found crimson in every nook of my vision. This was the moment in which my world collapsed…”
Stay tuned for the result on Wednesday (9/18/13).
Note: Thanks to my migraines I missed a chance for #13.13 to be on Friday the 13th! Oh well, that was the last thing on my mind whilst battling that demon.